so i recive this mesage that says
"may I ask for your reasoning behind simply saying 'fail'?"
well i never remember what i post wear so i look and see what the post was on well i see what the art was and i remember the fail that this kid had and i realize that no one likes to be left out in the dark when it comes to how they can improve them selves so i post the folowing in respons to lordhirosuke [link] on his motivational poster.
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I would gladly explain why I think your picture should be branded as a fail. Your picture first off, the picture you selected looks like you screen caped the commercial off of YouTube and then barley edited it to fit into a motivational poster generator. Now it’s better than the alternative of taking a picture of your TV with just a regular camera. So I will accept that you have a slight amount of computer skills but not much only to get you through your attempts at surfing. Second. I can see your trying to use the lyrics of the theme song from the commercials. Now most of the fail is here in this idea. For your sub-header you decided to use “let's hear it for Eddie Riggs” now, you could have used any line out of the song. And it’s a bad ass song, but the line you picked is all wrong, it would have been better to use a line that doesn’t use his name. example: “get your fix” or “getting down with his massive ax” (but then you would of have to find another picture wear he is about to chop some one’s face off probably when he jumps up and lands down on some one’s skull) or “hell yah.” Also your artist comment.
“I don't usually upload the motivators I make....anywhere.....except photobucket.....but i felt like sharing this with everyone. cuz.....i like this ship. i do. and i'm glad Eddie finally gets to teach her ‘The art of French Kissing’.”
Usually you don’t upload “motivators” its pretty dam obvious you don’t. Also your use of stanzas or “…” is way too much. Now if you’re trying to type like you speak you have a serious speaking problem and need to consult a doctor. Or learn better English. I’m not trying to teach you English “I’m at school all day why should I listen to this guy yell at me I don’t want to learn.” Well I agree, learning between 4pm and 6 am is not needed. Next your post.
“first comment woo! and how does the wind blow their hair in opposite directions? haha! video games.”
Sorry for the language but no shit your first post. Don’t do that ever on your own work. If you have something to say add it to your artist comments just put a “--------“ all the way across or like 15 of them to show that you added to your comment. You call yourself a fan of the game. If you are truly a fan of the game you should only put out stuff that you are 90% sure the creator/s of the game would find it somewhat good and not suck. You on the other hand have made a mockery of the game and everything that’s bad ass about it. Now everything I’ve said had been and honest opinion of what you have done and probably half of the DA community who knows about this game will probably agree with me but, just your lack of, I don’t know what to call it, but you just suck. After reading your comment
“and I’m glad Eddie finally gets to teach her ‘The art of French Kissing’.”
It makes me think your some prepubescent nerd who’s never had a girl friend. Now I realize that may have been a little harsh but I looked at your other art to see if this was just a slump in maybe some other great art you put out. I was sadly disappointed all your art is shit. Horrible attempts at using ms paint, and what looks like bad drawing on the inside of a notebook. And as I scrolled down to see more, my predictions about you were true you’re just a fat pudgy little nerd. Now I ask you what you were playing this on. Most likely 360. no? and your first system was probably a last generation right (PS2, Game cube, or an Xbox) now what gives me the right to ring you out? Well because I’ve had to wait for good graphics I started on a NES. Meaning I’ve had to grow up with the video game market. You on the other hand were given perfect graphics. You probably don’t know what it means to have a bit count do you. OK if you can honestly tell me what the bit count for all Nintendo systems without going to the wiki page for it, I will have a little bit more respect for you. I know when to concede to someone and in this respect I will to anyone who grew up with the Atari. There is no need for you to be playing this game your music knowledge probably doesn’t go back past 1995. Before this game you’ve never heard of Judaist Priest, or motor head, or Ozzy, and Black Sabith. Or any other licensed names that went into the making of this game. Let me guess you’re sitting on the couch one day and see a game stop commercial telling you to preorder the game. You think to yourself hey I really want that game. I’ve had to wait for 2 years since the E3 of 2007 when I first heard of this game. So I realize that most of this big long drawn out comment is mostly my thoughts of you and have everything to do with your character. And that I have never met you and you might be a great person but as of right now you’re just a fat pudgy fag. Oh and if you somehow what to readme yourself post back with something more than “AH FUCK YOU NOOBZOR UR A FAGOT AND LAMZOR IM TE HAX SUX MAH DICK FAG” an actual response using English not your lame counter strike retarded speak. Oh and if you can handle it you should find me on steam look for me. And we can finish this like me with guns. And if you think I’m just saying all this stuff because I’m on the internet probably 1,000 miles away. No if you were in my face id say all this right to you.
That sir is why I put “fail” because all of that pain and suffering of having to read all this would take too long. And you know what, I officially dub this an “EPIC FAIL” just on how much you do suck.

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and if your thinking well mumafiedmustangs why are you reposting this in your journal. well i have a fealing that this guy will just simply hide my post and runing from the truth. and it looks better cus its all smoshed up into a long comment so its also beter to read. and im just that full of my self.